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Graphic Design Firm | Targeting Founders in Los Angeles

Connection Request

{firstname}, I was connecting with Founders around LA and your brand piqued my interest. Hopefully we can connect!

2nd Message

Nice to meet you {firstname}! I hope you’re enjoying the warmer weather. I’ll keep in brief, we make unlimited animated videos and graphic design for a flat, low monthly rate. Is it okay I share some examples of past videos we made for IG and Facebook Ads?

3rd Message

Just wanted to gauge interest on my note above {firstname}. With no hourly rates or per project costs, clients find us more cost effective than hiring freelancers or using agencies.

Best!

-Client’s name

4th Message

How are you currently producing graphic designs/video?

Digital Marketing Agency | Targeting Manufacturing Executives

Connection Request

Hi {firstname}, I’ve been partnering with executives in manufacturing for the last 6 years. I stumbled across your profile and would like to add you to my professional network. Thanks!

2nd Message

Great to meet you {firstname}.

I researched your competing manufacturers and I’m putting together a custom analysis of your online presence for you. There’s a ton of opportunity in your space! Before I finish the analysis, I’d love to ask you a few questions to make it more personalized. What’s the best email for you?

3rd Message

If it’s easier to coordinate a call through a link, here’s my scheduler:

{{Calendar Link}}

4th Message

Hi {firstname}! How’s your manufacturing work been recently? I know things have been tougher operating through Covid, but I was curious how business is going.

Medical Device Company | Targeting Certified Diabetes Care and Education Specialists

Connection Request

{firstname}, I work with Diabetes Educators who are on the frontlines caring for patients with Diabetes during Covid 19, and I was hoping to connect with you here!

2nd Message

Thanks for connecting {firstname}. I'm curious. As a CDCES, are you having difficulty figuring out what insurance benefits will cover a C.G.M. Device? I know the office staff sometimes handles insurance.

3rd Message

Hi {firstname}. I'm trying to get feedback on how we can help you save time when ordering a C.G.M. Are you having a hard time filling out tedious paperwork or spending valuable time on the phone verifying insurance benefits and making pre-authorization calls?

4th Message

Hi {firstname}. We’re getting a lot of positive feedback on our C.G.M. Fulfillment Solution. It’s designed to take work off your plate when ordering a C.G.M. for your patients. We handle all the paperwork, insurance verification, authorization calls, and sensor refills at no cost to you. The CDCES's we work with love having direct access to an account manager to assist with their needs. Would this be a benefit for your practice.? Please let me know if you'd be interested in learning more?

Product Design Consultancy | Targeting the Head/Dir/VP of Product at mid-sized to large companies

Connection Request

{firstname} - impressed by your products.

2nd Message

Was curious to see what you’re working on. For context, I’ve designed top-selling products for Oracle, Intuit, IBM and Cisco. Open to talking UX some time {firstname}?

3rd Message

Thought I’d bump my note above {firstname}, incase you’re not on LinkedIn much.

4th Message

Hi {firstname},

If you ever want to strategize around product design, I wanted to make a short introduction:

We design UI for AI, to delight consumers and crush sales goals for your next big win.

Case studies:

  • Aible: Designed AI/Machine Learning solution, named Gartner Cool Vendor™

  • Intuit: Designed 6 iOS & Android Featured apps, which boosted downloads 20X.

  • Cisco: Made their IoT Smart Meters easier to use, contributing to $200M in new sales.

  • Portfolio: 9 patents filed and 60+ projects shipped.

Hope to connect in the future,

{{Your Name}}

SaaS Platform | Targeting Pre-construction Managers

Connection Request

Hey {firstname} – saw you do some preconstruction work and wanted to reach out. We’re working on a new platform for faster and more organized estimates from subs on bid day. Would be great to share more and get your thoughts on it.

2nd Message

{firstname} – thanks.

To increase bids, we created a pre-construction platform where GCs and subs can collaborate on drawings and estimates. Can I email you a quick video of how it works?

Regards,

{{Your Name}}

3rd Message

Hey {firstname} – which email is best to send that to?

4th Message

Thought I’d go ahead and share the video:

{{Video link to a short demo.}}

As a side note: our CEO started iSqFt, and created STACK, which over the last year has powered 400,000 takeoffs.

Insurance Broker | Targeting home inspectors

Connection Request

{firstname}, I’ve “inspected” your profile and would like to add you to my network. If you don’t mind bad jokes, let’s connect!

2nd Message

Great to connect with you, {firstname}. Quick Q: Is your liability/E&O insurance custom tailored for your inspection work?

3rd Message

I only ask because our insurance firm specializes in inspection companies. Because we have 20+ years of relationships built with multiple carriers, we can pass the absolute best coverage and lowest costs directly to you.

Are you open to a free review of your current coverage? Excited to compare!

4th Message

Hi {firstname} - Just checking back on my note above. Should be a quick 10-min call.

Leadership Consultant | Targeting local CEOs

Connection Request

{firstname}, I saw you run a business a little ways from my office in Annapolis. I work with several CEOs in the area, and thought it’d be good to connect and learn more about your business.

2nd Message

{firstname}, thanks. How’s Q3 looking?

3rd Message

{firstname},

I’d like to learn more about your business. To start, it usually makes sense to chat off LinkedIn and unearth any core issues. I’ve led publicly-traded companies and startups to multiple, double-digit reversals of negative ebitda and revenue (one client boosted his stock from $17 to $71 with us). I get in the trenches with CEOs and help them implement strategies to win their time back, and 2X business.

Best to move off LinkedIn? I’ve asked my EA, Ms. Erin Fuente to reach out to schedule a short call.

{{Your Name}}

4th Message

Hey {firstname},

Have you ever worked with an executive advisor? If so, what was your honest opinion of them.